Report, if you have a problem with this page“ Watch a good movie sometime without reference to what’s happening but only with attention to how it was photographed; you’ll see the change of focus—zoom in, pan out, close-up on face, fade to black, open from above—easily. You want to do that in what you write; it’s one of the things that keep people’s eyes on the page, though they’re almost never conscious of it. ”
Diana Gabaldon
From : "I Give You My Body . . .": How I Write Sex Scenes
